Welcome to Publishing: Class Rules

In elementary school, one of the first things you did when starting a new school year was go over the class rules. These rules were usually pretty simple, but they did a lot to keep the class running smoothly. So in the back-to-school spirit, I’m going to be sharing the class rules for publishing.

  1. Be nice to everyone.
  2. Work hard.
  3. Be patient.
  4. Read as much as possible.
  5. Have fun!

Pretty simple, right? Of course there are other things you should do. But at the end of the day, I think these are the basics . They make a world of difference.

Publishing is a hard business to be in. There are a lot of people trying to get in and get published, so etiquette is important. As simple as these rules may be, they go a long way to keeping publishing afloat. The rules are there to help you too.

So stick to them and you’ll have a great year (and career)!

7 Tips to Improve Writing Voice

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As I get ready to put my preschooler on a big yellow bus for the first time, I’m excited and nervous for the two of us. I loved school, and I’m nostalgic while I relive those days vicariously through my son. But I’m also nostalgic for when he was eight months old. My husband was in Afghanistan, and it was just me and this little dude with an unfortunate 1960s haircut, scooting around on the floor at the speed of a freight train. How is he five years old already?

Some of your local school districts may have started school a month ago. Some started this week. Some haven’t started yet! Whether you’re already inundated with homework or you’ve been out of school for decades, you never have to stop learning. Indeed, you never should.

If you’ve been following my blog for a while, you might remember when I did a guest post for Better Novel Project. That post was about writing dialogue, but I’ll let you in on a secret. The same methods you’ll use to strengthen your dialogue are the same you can use to strengthen your writer’s voice.

What is Voice?

People like to pretend that “voice” is this illusive, infamous enigma.

Voice is how your words sound.

It’s a combination of diction (word choice) and syntax (word order).

Everyone has a natural voice—it’s affected by culture, style, and education. By “education” I don’t mean just formal schooling, I mean what people read or listen to in their spare time, their experience, and their worldview (their personal philosophy which affects the way they observe and interpret the world).

Obviously as an editor, I’m a proponent of “good” grammar in formal writing. A standardized grammatical form allows for the best reading comprehension. However, fiction is not formal writing—that’s why people actually read it. Readers want authentic voices in their novels. Sometimes that means “improper” grammar.

I use scare quotes above, because there’s no such thing as good or proper grammar, just formal and informal. Grammar should only be prescribed when it will improve reading comprehension.

Of course, I do have some pet peeves, but as long as your formality/informality is consistent in consistent situations, many of my grammatical edits will be marked as subjective rather than objective “that was wrong, this is right” statements.

Back to voice. When asked how he would define it, a Milkweed editor said, “Good voice is something I’d pay to listen to.”

Good, consistent voice suggests a singular person is behind it. When I read a developed voice, I can hear what the audiobook might sound like. Is your text readable out loud? If not, the voice isn’t going to sound authentic. Your writing will seem like writing–you’ll be drawing attention to yourself and your diction or syntax rather than immersing your reader in the story.

So how do you write authentic voice? Read my 7 tips at Better Novel Project.

Goodbye, Summer! 5 Steps to Transition into Fall Writing

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The end of summer is here, and the change in seasons can be either a blessing or bane to writers.

For some of you, summer was relaxing—there were vacations, weekends at the cabin, and maybe even months off if you’re a students or teacher. Without the pressures of everyday life, you had hours to sip lemonade and make a dent in your current manuscript. For others, writing was a laughably unattainable goal—the kids were home and demanding entertainment, there were family gatherings galore, and this was the year the yard needed some serious attention. For you, the return to a fall schedule is something to embrace with open arms.

Whether you’re dreading or eagerly anticipating the return of regularity to your schedule, there are five simple steps you can take to move smoothly away from August and into September. Remember, habits take time to form, and finding time for your writing is no different. Find what works, and then stick with it. Even if it’s just a few minutes a day, writing regularly this fall will help you continue to write regularly throughout the rest of the year.

1: Give yourself time.

The arrival of fall might make you busier—or it might make you less so. Either way, you’re facing a change. Give yourself a little time to find out what your schedule is really going to be like after that change. When you know how your weeks will be paced and when you’ll feel perky instead of drained, you’ll have a better sense of when to schedule your writing time. You don’t need to know ahead of time what life is going to be like—wait and see!

2: Be flexible.

If you weren’t keeping to a fixed writing schedule over the summer, it might be tricky to plan one for the fall. Let yourself have a little wiggle-room to adjust if your planned writing time isn’t working out for you. If you planned to write in the morning but realize you think more clearly just before bed, go ahead and switch! You can use your mornings to read or catch up on some well-deserved rest. If you thought you’d write Tuesdays and Thursdays but have more time on Mondays and Wednesdays, don’t try to stick with the days that don’t work! Know yourself and your writing needs, and adjust as needed.

3: Make it fun.

You might be past the days of your own new backpack and lunchbox, but that doesn’t mean you can’t celebrate the back-to-school spirit! If you like to write with pen and paper, treat yourself to a fresh, new journal—or break into one of the dozens you already have stored in your closet (yeah, I’m talking to myself here). If you prefer to use the computer, buy yourself a new, colorful flash drive or instrumental music album. Grab a mug and a new flavor of coffee or tea. Don’t mourn the end of summer; celebrate the arrival of fall and make your writing time fun!

4: Once you get it, stick with it.

Once you find a time that works, stick with it, even when it’s hard. The more you force yourself to write this fall, the easier it will be to continue the habit through the cold winter months. If it’s difficult at first, don’t look at your work too seriously—do some journaling or follow some writing prompts if you’re not feeling up to adding on to your work in progress. Whatever you do, write! If you miss a day, don’t give up; continue the next day. It might be uncomfortable at first, but you’ll be glad you pushed through.

5: Keep it short and sweet.

If you’re a writer who writes in spurts, it’s tempting to want to schedule long chunks of writing time or high word count goals. Don’t overcommit! If you know you can put an hour or two into your book on a given day, go for it, but don’t expect yourself to do so every day. Keep your writing goals short and sweet. That way, if you write more, you’ll feel good about yourself, but if you write just a little, you’ll still know you’re making progress. Earlier this year, I read a book on how to write a novel in ten-minute increments. The author planned and wrote her own novel in between laundry loads and homeschool lessons, and it worked. She knew the value of biting off only what you can chew. It’s better to plan small and carry it out than plan big and never get there!

Let’s do it together!

I’m one of those writers who had a crazy summer and let my writing slip. While I like to keep a flexible schedule, I appreciate the return to normalcy that September promises me. This month, it’s time for me to take my own advice—I’ll be pulling out my shiny new journal, making another stop at Teavana, and settling in to find my writing groove between editing and grading days.

As the seasons change, join me in embracing fall with your own updated writing schedule. Why wait for New Year’s Eve to make a writing resolution? When January comes, you can remember the season of crisp leaves and fresh apples and smile at how far you’ve already come.

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Beta Reader, Editor or Agent: What Do You Need Next?

As an aspiring writer, it can be quite confusing to know what it actually takes to get your writing on someone else’s bookshelf (besides your Mom’s).

If you want to see your MS become a book someday, your scribbles a website or your jumbled thoughts a zine, you have to give it a chance instead of just leaving it to chance.

What you need next

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Giving your work a chance means going through all the necessary steps. But maybe you’re just not sure what your next step should be. This quick guide is meant to help you discover what you need next–  beta reader, editor or agent– to help get your writing where you want it to go.

Find a beta reader when…

You’ve written something up. Abandoned it. Re-visited and re-vamped. Hemmed, hawed, edited and proofread. But not another set of eyes (besides maybe your mother’s) have seen what you’ve written. It’s time for some beta readers. Whether you ask for volunteers, offer some sort of incentive, or join a writing group, you’ll want some feedback even before your writing hits the editor’s desk.

Practical tips: Beta readers should be just the right mix of critical and encouraging, the people you can trust to be honest and objective. They should also be at least somewhat versed in the genre you’re writing in and excited about giving their input.

Hire an editor when…

You’ve gone through the beta-reader stage and done at least one revision on your own.  Keep in mind, that not all editors are created equal. Some are well-versed in helping develop your novel, some may be better at combing through and improving it line-by-line. A good editor, says Ashley of Brooks Editorial, will help you figure out just what it is that you need.

Practical tips: Ask for referrals from the editor your querying, or maybe even a free/ discounted 5-page edit to see there skills at work. If you don’t feel like the editor is working with you, then move on. Improving your MS should be a team effort and a positive experience.

Attract an agent when…

Well, this one can be tricky.  Even if you’ve been through the previous steps, you still might not be ready. When you’re looking for an agent, not only does your writing have to be edited, polished and attractive, but you need your ‘poop in a group.’

What is the ‘poop’ to which I refer? For starters, a query letter, synopsis of your story and probably a few example chapters ready to go. Make sure not to let this other stuff slip by without an editor’s eye as well!

Practical tips: Research agents to see what they look for to determine which agent might accept your MS. Know your MS. If it’s not mainstream, don’t go from the mainstream agents. Also, check out the fees. Most agents are paid on commission from your books sales (typically 15 percent) so upfront costs are usually  a red flag.

Obviously, this is not all there is to it. If you’re published or about to be, what did it take you to get there? We would love to hear your thoughts!

originally published on my blog on 8-7-15